All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 08'

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DingbatwizardDingbatwizard10 months ago

"If I was white, you'd fuck me," said Divine, resorting to cheap shots.

"If you were white, I'd spank you," replied Connor.

Glorious writing! Thank you for this great series.

JohnPaulJrJohnPaulJr10 months ago

Very funny, very sexy, very enjoyable.

PappasleazePappasleaze10 months ago

I need the adress of this church, I was looking for a different one to attend. Good job . Thank you for sharing

Rainyday493Rainyday49310 months ago

Awesome, elevating pleasure to the top of a church's priorities, super idea!

HoumafanHoumafan10 months ago

Oh, yes! I’m beginning to feel a little envious of Connor.

The_Veil_of_IsisThe_Veil_of_Isis10 months agoAuthor

Actually, parts of the story are taken from the church I used to attend. Some bits are embellished, of course, but others I had to tone down. Lots of scandals, either of the sexual or the financial variety!

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I am in my mid/late twenties and love painting and handcrafting. I have recently started writing again, encouraged by the success of a short story in an online competition. I took a creative writing minor at college. I am straight but bicurious.

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