All Comments on 'The Temptations of Dee Pt. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonder how far on Anna is on in her quest for motherhood.?

Please more on Annas quest for motherhood.

alexetlaurealexetlaureover 3 years ago

Stunning story ...enjoyed it a lot ! Waiting eagerly for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loving this story!

I'm not sure I can love this story more! I find it so perfect. I love her distinction between "her man" and "her husband". The contrast between the two is as clear as their skin tone. Please continue!!

JustanormalhornymaleJustanormalhornymaleover 3 years ago
Not feeling it

This section did nothing for me...all previous were good..this i had to struggle through

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep the story hotter!

LaTreya will pair svelte Lisa with Anna and Dee and make 30 year old Lisa whip 40 year old Dee into shape with the very rigorous exercise designed to push both women into total exhaustion as they forget about their husbands. And Lisa will be turned on about the prospect of fully dominating Dee as her submissive slut.

Siska100Siska100over 3 years ago

I found this installement very good in setting the table for Dee to embrace her true self. Can't wait to read the next part.

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Challenge 5 is now available. A lot of world-building in this one but I hope you enjoy it. Challenge 6 is 80% written and should be submitted before the end of the month. Thanks for all your kind comments and support