All Comments on 'The Therapist Ch. 04'

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honeybreehoneybreealmost 14 years ago
Great but way to short...

nice update on the story can't wait to see what else you write on these two and Lisa and Albert is an interesting pairing

grunabonagrunabonaalmost 14 years ago
Short, and...

you still could use an editor, but I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Loved the story

I love the new chapter. I hope you make a story with Albert and Lisa after you finish this one. I hope Jake sister wises up before she get hurt/

luv_romanceluv_romancealmost 14 years ago
nice

this is a nice story. continue please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
please keep going

i hope you have not gave up on the story i really like the new charaters and hope to see the story go on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
KEEP THIS GOING

You've established the characters and this story has SOOOO much potential. Can't wait for the next installment!

Jujubee50Jujubee50over 13 years ago
Please update!

I hope you decide to eventually finish this story!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
The

story can be followed pretty easily, just more editing and the proper words will do this story justice! Keep it up!

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

I would have hit that little girl with my car for that stinky little attitude

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