by Brownrice_sugar
nice update on the story can't wait to see what else you write on these two and Lisa and Albert is an interesting pairing
I love the new chapter. I hope you make a story with Albert and Lisa after you finish this one. I hope Jake sister wises up before she get hurt/
i hope you have not gave up on the story i really like the new charaters and hope to see the story go on!
You've established the characters and this story has SOOOO much potential. Can't wait for the next installment!
story can be followed pretty easily, just more editing and the proper words will do this story justice! Keep it up!