All Comments on 'The Thief in the Corner Office Pt. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Although this is similar to your previous story about Anitta, this one showed that the invention also changed Bill. The story would be better if those changes were more visible, because as it is, I can see, but it's subtle. It's mostly that he wanted to degrade Alice but ended up enjoying her company. I wouldn't call it love, instead, a form of care. Anyway, Bill is not the same as in the beginning of the story, and it was a good idea to write it this way.

C_frommnC_frommn8 months ago

Now that he has her giving him everything including herself. it's time he went after another if it's a guy then he could get the guy to accept that he will impregnate his wife and He the cuck will rasise it as his own.

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