All Comments on 'The Toilet Club Ch. 20'

well its really good ...i suggest a scene where susan will shit on mikes dick while fucking him

Eventually I’d like them far more messy. But I’m loving the story.

I enjoyed it I'm a submissive crossdress I've love to be dominant by women I've had golden showers. I love to eat hot dirrty,sweaty pussy and ass I've never had the pleasure of being shit on. I love to have a lady use toys on me

Really nice story! I would like som chapters where Mike is dressed as a sissy with white lingerie and high heels and Susan is a leather domina in tigh high boots. Some fisting and speculum play would also make my day a lot better:-) Keep up the good work:-)

Many thanks for the enthusiasm and comments. They go a long way towards keeping me writing. 5-star ratings are another encouragement. Some of your suggestions may be fulfilled, though possibly not precisely as you wish. The story's characters have their own say, as well.

Chapters 21-22 should be submitted in the next day or so. They are written, but still undergoing feedback from my editors, bless them.

“well its really good ...i suggest a scene where susan will shit on mikes dick while fucking him” comment I agree too

Gave you another 5 stars ! You write so well, we don't want this story to end. So glad to see the next chapter appear today. I hope the Toilet Club will gain other membersf as the story unfolds. Like I said before, it is utterly entertaining, lots of action and humour. Two thumbs up !

I suppose it can only get filthier if Meg joins The Club.