by Swingly
Hot damn! Excellent plot twist already. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Good story, good writing (with a need for minor edits). Can't wait to see the next chapter.
This story is evolving very nicely and wonderfully erotic. Your characters are so diverse and yet they mix well together. Looking forward to Madison’s climax
A lot better than the first chapter with both still being hot. Good job. Let us know what's happening with sonia and Narni as well. I personally would like to hear about both couples eash chapter, I know that could be a big request so it isn't expected. seperating them in chapters might lean to more chapters as well. 5 stars .