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All Comments on 'The Unmaking of Olly'

by SashaSunday

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This just about sings to my subby soul

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Its believable situation and Lusia as a character is very real and tangible with a touch of scary

dieter40sndieter40snalmost 2 years ago

geile story, hoffentlich geht es weiter, danke.

LeoLewinskyLeoLewinskyover 1 year ago

Very nice beginning, please keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

more please . loved it

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I am Sasha, an owned sub. I love writing bdsm erotica - any constructive criticism is always welcome. I am specifically into femdom, forced bi and CNC.