All Comments on 'The Valentine's Day Triple Play'

I've already said this privately, but I think this is a remarkable story - and in my personal opinion, it is your best work yet. And no, that has nothing to do with my minor contribution; I felt that way when you sent me the first version already! You capture the essence of a loving-but-kinky couple. Your dialogue is spectacular. Every sex scene is titillating, and the pace is just right. Furthermore, you pack a ton of steamy scenes into a rather low amount of words considering how much lovemaking occurs. Magnificent. I hope you do extremely well in the competition, my friend.

Great sex and emotional interaction between the characters. Fun hot story. Bravo!

There are many wonderful, well-written stories on Literotica that take two or three pages or more to get to the sex—but you started with the sex and never stopped. This one’s over the top, beautiful Freya.

Any truly romantic Valentine's day should include butt plugs and anal sex. I like where your stories and their content is going. My shrink asked me if I thought sex was dirty. I told him it is if it's done right. You keep getting it right. Well done.

Ah, to be young again. So much energy. Well Done.

Hot! Every man wants “triple plays!”

@luv2custrip, you wrote "There are many wonderful, well-written stories on Literotica that take two or three pages or more to get to the sex—but you started with the sex and never stopped." Well, if you go out for a gourmet meal, you don't fill up on the free bread, right?? 😆

@ccitydude said, "My shrink asked me if I thought sex was dirty. I told him it is if it's done right." Ha ha!! Yes, I agree!! But, for me at least, it needs to include BOATLOADS (buttloads??) of love!!!! ❣️

@Vikingchief76, and when I'm Queen of the Universe, every man will get them!!!

Very filthy, meaning very good. Cheers!

Great story! Really Hot! Well done!

Always enjoy your stories. This one too. :)

I loved how you developed their day together and the climax was hot!

Every young couple in love should enjoy their Valentine's Day like this. HOT!!! Good luck in the contest.

Great story! Reminds me of my youth!

Thank you, everyone, for reading and commenting!! Glad you enjoyed this little story!!!

Great story! Blends of wholesome and loving with pure unadulterated sex. You threw me a curveball with the puppy being his present. Maybe I’ve read too many of those stories but I half expected the neighbors to be his present.

What a rollicking good time❗ Thanks for a great romantic read.

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Well written, and very erotic!

@jschmosucks, you wrote: "I half expected the neighbors to be his present." Well... Stay tuned!!!

@Rhino77Pilot, thank you so much!!!

I've only just discovered your erotic tales - But I'm very glad I have.

Thank you for sharing your gift. Deserved and given 5* ........ T

A great little interlude, Freya. I love the number of ways in which you describe her sensations (the spanking, the car ride, the sitting down on the bench) emanating from the butt plug.

I must get my apron out and see where it leads 😀

@Anonymous, butt plugs can be quite sensational!! 😉 I'm so glad that you're enjoying the stories!!