All Comments on 'The Waiter Gets Served Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
very good story

you add just enough little details to give it flavor, but not enough to bog the story down with minutiae. I truly hope that you continue this story in a series fashion, it would be interesting to read about these characters some more.

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