All Comments on 'The Waitress'

A reasonable novice introduction. Certainly not a real story.

Sorry but this was totally unbelievable. What husband would attempt to arrange a "swinging/swapping" situation without having discussed it with his wife FIRST? What does she think about swinging? He's living in a fantasy land. Also, his description of Michelle as "a ballerina having a curvy, hourglass figure with a plump rear that wobbles when she walks" does not match that of a ballerina. Her posture could never fit that description.

Anyway, keep writing. Practice will always improve the result. Cheers.

Dreamland, where ballerinas are overweight pawgs, and willing to step into swinging without warning? Basically, a story about a pimp and his washed up ho, using her to try and tip a waiter. Nothing more.

What poor young people who, after only two years of marriage, need a third party to improve their sex life!

Not too bad for a beginner. But as others have said --- totally unbelievable!!!!! And your use of the names got mixed up ---- Paul was with Julie and Eric was with Michelle during the abbreviated swap <<paragraphs 26 & 27!!!! Get an editor and/or a proofreader and use them before you publish another story!!!!!

They just suddenly left? Well then, guess I will too. Goodb…

All these Stories?, are Complete Bullshit. It would NEVER happen in Real Life.