All Comments on 'The Wedding Pt. 02 - The Future'

I enjoy this story very much the part where they watched each other was hot

Good story it has room to grow. Might about Suzie feeling a little left out with Katie reconnecting with her biological family. Maybe a little john jr giving her some bonding time.

Hot stuff. Please don't involve dad or Mom in sex with the kids. that would totally ruin a good sibling romance.

It's a hot story but you really do need to get a proof reader to correct some of the grammatical errors.

@MikeinMemphis actually I do have a proof reader and this story was edited with a score of 100% at least college level.

I sent it over on a word document and the version that was copied or transcribed was not my original version I had to edit errors that were never in the original story

But all in all I'll take 4 spelling errors means I'm slowly getting better at this. The problem isn't proofreading it's catching new errors before it's published and this site relies on a.i.