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All Comments on 'The Will of Miss Jaqueline Pt. 02'

by EdwardsOtherSide

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

But seems pretentious -- especially when you use different, odd, unusual words for body parts, such as your description of her pussy.

Sex OK, but not great.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Interesting and different. Your stories, exploring different aspects of the power dynamics within relationships, are fresh and absorbing. Thoroughly enjoyed all I have read to date.

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Mostly I wrote for friends, but decided to see what a broader audience thinks. My biggest challenge here is picking a category for my stories; I seem to write a lot of cross-category stuff. I have sort of a dull day job, but I work with good people, so I don't complain. Liv...

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