by Miles63
Thanks, in answer to the question about her being over 200 and knowing how to use a cell phone, she explored and learned about the new world before she trapped Debbie, should have mentioned it in the story I suppose, lol!
there are few things that made me brake the spell of reading a good story. First, a 200year old witch, that hid for a very long time, over sudden pocked around a cell phone and read text msgs? The other one is witches sexy outfit, Victoria's Secret ??? Just doesn't click. Otherwise LOVED IT !!!!!!!
You did a good job with your first story. There were several typos or misspelling, but not enough to turn off the reader, completely.