All Comments on 'The Wrong Person'

Nicely written and erotic, with a hint of romance. An enjoyable read. The frenum, or more commonly frenulum, is the strip of skin holding an organ, like the one under your tongue or under the penis. It’s not really that whole area. It’s also ‘perineum’. End of anatomy lesson!

Thanks for those, I'll correct for later stories (3 left in this arc). I didn't intend the romance, but the characters insisted, watch this space. Still looking for a beta reader if you want to privately feedback - confidence assured. Alex ;-)

Nice story!!! Although I am partial to a woman's point of view!!! :-) Great descriptions and dialog!!!!