All Comments on 'This is Sweden'

You probably put in a lot of work into this, but I can't honestly say that the end result is good, because it's not.

The characters are poorly written with no personality. Besides one or two sentences describing them there's just nothing there. There is no plot, like at all. All of that can be forgiven if the smut is good, but there's not even that.

All you get is an awkward story about two "gay" guys randomly hooking up with two "lesbians." I mean, there's probably a very niche demo into that, but this story is a big old nothing burger. Either make the characters and plot more interesting or try writing explicit sex scenes. That would be my advice.

PS: why isn't there a bi section on this site? This definitely does not belong in the gay category.

The story rambles with no clear characters, smut or anything else. Quiet a boring story. And there should be a bisexual section on the site

Your comments are welcomed, bi was not mentioned by intent. It all boils down to what is meant by bi. I asked a open question when is bi, bi and when is gay bi. Answer’s were, when activity was by same sex is gay and when three involved with two sexes was bi. This definition is what I applied. What are your views.

This story was to convey an attitude that I found in Sweden, open and tolerant, both in business and private live and when they both meet. The characters personalities are not in depth but to generalise for the purposes of this story a culture and open mindset.