All Comments on 'Thomas Longfellow Brown'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
WOW!

Young student suffers the shame of a 10 incher, until his teacher Gloria Jackson has pity and takes him - in - a fashion - under her - Uh - Wing? Don't knock it - He did get an A in the final. Fun Read.

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 5 years ago
What humor ?

Something in the story should have been funny for the story to have been placed in humor/satire. I never cracked a smile ! WTF! Do you think that that time worn cliche about being fucked to death was funny? Get a good editor before submitting anything in any category. Someone who will tell you the truth, not blow smoke up your ass. Gave it a 2 for grammar. Not funny !

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 5 years ago
Hmmm...

Well...

The end was funny anyway.

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