All Comments on 'Three is Company'

Good premise.

But clarity is not there. In multiple sentences it's not clear which girl is doing what. You have to wait until the NEXT sentence to understand.

Could have used some dialog during sex. Look at that cock. See how hard it is? Why don't you touch it? Tease it, he likes that. Show him your boobs. He loves to suck nipples, would you like yours sucked? Are you wet? How wet? Etc.

Three stars.

Every paragraph was one sentence with commas where periods should have gone. You write like a 3rd grade drop out. It's impossible to follow and understand they way you write. Give up and go back to your Mama's basement.

Not sure what the other two posters problem is; I thought it was a good story. Yes sentences ran together, Yes punctuation could have been better, I graduated 50 years ago so who cares. we all miss those things. I was able to understand the story. keep going.

Pappasleaze!

Please tell us what happen not only the next morning but the following week at work.

This story captures the lhigh-delight of a man gifted the opportunity to fuck a new woman. The language is erotic and satisfying in that regard. Criticizing this work, as some did, because of comma placement and sentence structure is the attitude of people who should be reading National Geographic or the like... Good grief people, it's porn in print, not a literary competition. I would have found the story much more satisfying if Sarah got her orgasm too. probably from Tammy.