by CycleWriter
Not a bad story. Look forward to the oldest sister. But wrong category. Adopted sex is not incest. Perhaps slightly perverted, but not incest. Now if you get the sisters together, you'll be ok.
"in the glow of after sex" VS "in the sweet afterglow of sex"
A strong tendency to go over the top on descriptive writing. Might well consider the KISS Principle in stories. Simpler is usually clearer and better!!
Still wish he had continued to fuck her prissy ass and pussy and have her sucking his cock.
Was she a virgin? Wish you had told us more than just tight.
Looking forward to fucking SISTER 1.