All Comments on 'Time Never Waits Pt. 10'

by Incestgod

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HawkEye1969HawkEye19696 months ago

ASS!!! You just had to put a cliffhanger in there. Lol I can not wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Loving it!

Sherrie008Sherrie0086 months ago

I loved it…. Thanks for your hard work and great story!

I was indeed left hanging!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Loving the story, can't wait to read more

DigitalDreamerDigitalDreamer6 months ago

I appreciate a cliffhanger, but I would appreciate a little more finesse, leaving a sentence ...

(Do I make my point?)

Otherwise, I am enjoying the walk down memory lane.

IncestgodIncestgod6 months agoAuthor

Well, I left it at that because I wasn't sure what qas even going to be there. I started this story on a whim and it's unfolded along the way. Made mistakes, learned a lot. Kind of like A New Begining I'm playing by ear. I'm planning a continuing series of romance novels I'm going to self publish

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I really enjoyed this story as I am a time travel fan.

One comment though. I think any mention of Carol should have been Sharon instead, if my memory of the earlier chapters is correct. Also Victoria should have been Virginia.

IncestgodIncestgod6 months agoAuthor

You are correct. I changed the names of the characters because I had originally planhed on using Sharon and Virginia in a similar project I'm working on. I din't want to use the names twice in two similar story lines. I apologize for the confusion

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