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by PearlCummings

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodle10 months ago

When writing, use first person: “I did this and when I saw his face, I knew I was in trouble” or third person: “she was in a bad mood all day and when she snapped at him, he was angry”

2nd person almost never works because you’re telling us, the reader, what we would do.

SugarDaddyDomSugarDaddyDom10 months ago

A lovely beginning. I enjoyed the energy and passion displayed. Just as a good girl should.

I look forward to more.

SugarDaddyDom

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