All Comments on 'Time Stop Adventure Ch. 02'

What are you?? 10 years old? Story sophistication and spelling are ridiculous.

Thier arr sew meny spelling airors itz hard too reed. The worst part is that this is a blatent not to mention illegal ripoff of The Fermata. You should be arretsed and fined for stealing and then writing a lousy story.

Enjoyed the story very much. Been hoping you would carry on the time line. Love the theme. Can’t wait to read more.

Great story. I like the running theme of Brandi embarrassing guys with small dicks and blueballing guys with big dicks.