All Comments on 'Time Stop Inheritance Ch. 04'

Very nice. I wish we could have spent more time in the locker room, but the twist of the basement made up for it. For getting to see what happens like in the locker room he could set up video cameras that would capture the moment of them after he starts time, then he could stop time and retrieve them. Just a thought.

This was fucking hot, fucking the women to their orgasm and then watching the puzzlement when they experience it post time stop. But the story lost all sexual aspect when it devolved into abduction and acknowledged rape.

Excellent work, again. Nice expansion of the world.