All Comments on 'Timestopper Ch. 01: Late to Class'

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CorjixCorjixabout 2 years ago

Just okay. Call me impatient, but I need more of the 'heat' that the prologue generated in my mind...and in my very wet bikini briefs. Maybe the next chapter....?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

OMG gaytimestop, what a fantastic mind you have. I would have never guessed that the prologue story would take this turn. This is truly imaginative and very well written. I will definitely be waiting for chapter #2 of this great story. This was easily five stars plus. Thanks, MLF

darksexactsdarksexactsabout 2 years ago

Pretty good story, got me off. Not necessarily original, but I really liked the n/c part of what happens when time stops. I get the shy geek boy type from Smalltown Nowhere, but I do like lots of action from the start. I will read the rest of the series. There was enough to hook me, now keep reeling me in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Different , but still erotic

SuperCooperSuperCooper5 months ago

I would be a menace with this watch.

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