by gaytimestop
Just okay. Call me impatient, but I need more of the 'heat' that the prologue generated in my mind...and in my very wet bikini briefs. Maybe the next chapter....?
OMG gaytimestop, what a fantastic mind you have. I would have never guessed that the prologue story would take this turn. This is truly imaginative and very well written. I will definitely be waiting for chapter #2 of this great story. This was easily five stars plus. Thanks, MLF
Pretty good story, got me off. Not necessarily original, but I really liked the n/c part of what happens when time stops. I get the shy geek boy type from Smalltown Nowhere, but I do like lots of action from the start. I will read the rest of the series. There was enough to hook me, now keep reeling me in.