All Comments on 'Tom's Enslavement Ch. 01'

Story needs to end with Alan’s brains on the wall.

It’s sad what people find erotic

sehr geiler beginn, bin gespannt wie es mit den dreien weiter geht.

Not worth my 2 minutes

A rape said to be erotic but is disgusting

No fool would ever go back and drink more once his wife said that to him. however, your story was told well and clearly with grammar seemingly correct, keep writing.