All Comments on 'Tom's Parallel World Pt. 04'

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Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story keep them coming.

Randychristian almost 3 years ago

Great read. Love the Grey areas when it comes to sex. A better read than some other 4.somethings I've read here over the years. Keep up the good work.

rayirony over 2 years ago

the nom-de-plume of

Nellymcboatface is damn near adorable.

L0vat almost 2 years ago

Ok, um constructive criticism. I personally find it a little difficult to follow who is who when you name one character Tom and the other one Thomas. I found that pretty confusing. Also you have someone who "didn't appreciate the brevity of the situation." I am assuming that is an error you didn't catch unless brits define brevity in a different way than we do across the pond.

That said, the story this far is very hot and I am enjoying it immensely.

SatyrDick over 1 year ago

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Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

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