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Click here"I tricked Thomas, getting him to admit his love whilst Becky was eavesdropping."
Tom sniggered as he squinted, trying to focus on Peter, but his eyelids dropped, his face drained ashen white, and his head wobbled as his legs buckled beneath him. Peter caught him as he collapsed, lowering him to the floor. He led him down and raised his legs to keep the blood in his head. Whilst the colour returned to his face, his eyes remained closed. Although, not unconscious anymore, as he emitted snoring noises.
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- COMMENTS
SatyrDick5 months ago[08.12.23]
I mentioned the Cybermen thing before, but forgot to mention that you mentioned their 'knock-offs' the Borg.
Still 11/10!!!!!
xtrail65about 1 year agoI seriously can’t tell you how much I enjoy reading and re-reading this series
SatyrDickover 1 year ago[12.12.22]
Excellent chapter!
Love the further transformation to Tom.
One small niggle...'cybermen' should be capitalised.
11/10!!!!!
Anonymousover 2 years agoVery good, engaging writing. You keep everything and everyone straight, and me not confused. That's not an easy thing to do. Plus, there's mystery and a nefarious plot AND all of the sex with different partners to keep up with! And our Tom is slowly turning into an at-will merman with a mermaid girlfriend. Ya got yer hands full. I can't read fast enough. Thanks.
