All Comments on 'Too Good To Be True Ch. 23'

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jni551jni5519 months ago

You must just keep writing. It is too good.

NaughtyPaladinNaughtyPaladin9 months agoAuthor

Next Chapter is already submitted.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Keep it up, I really enjoy all your stuff.

WargamerWargamer8 months ago

Great stuff, enjoyable story

5/5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I won't lie, I'm a little upset that tradition was broke and he pulled out. It was also a missed opportunity for a really hot act of having Tamora just say fuck it, wrap her legs around him and beg him, "cum in your slave's worthless pussy, master!" Oh well, too bad.

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