All Comments on 'Toys of A Cruel and Curious God'

by PreggoClaireBrooks42

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King_MacAulayKing_MacAulayabout 1 year ago

Ha! That's excellent. Love the premise!

PreggoClaireBrooks42PreggoClaireBrooks42about 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you! I have been a big Sims fan and the concept of Sims becoming aware of a player controlling their actions has always been a fun concept for me, even more so knowing about game cheats such as motherload and cheats that effect pregnancy. I thought it might be interesting if the "Sim" in question had OUR understanding of how long pregnancy takes (the usual 9 months) and was shocked when they realized that it was going much faster (the three days that it takes in the Sims). Adding that to cheat codes that would speed up the pregnancy even FASTER than the Sims pregnancy rate was a fun and horrifying concept to play around with.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Ha ha ha you made me think of the Futurama episode where fry and the rest of the gang get put in a alien zoo I didn’t realize it was about the sims until they end you should continue with the story add maybe another chapter where it has them playing sims with in the sims and there created is wondering what happening not realizing she a sim character as well

zededd2000zededd200012 months ago

About half way through I was thinking that this all reminded me of the sims haha. Good twist. Would have been nice to be a bit more stretched out, but it is a darned good story.

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