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Click hereBeyond even that, it seemed that the man who had started everything, the founding father of this coterie of killers, seemed to consider her a person of interest as well.
Was he the only one who could see her for what she was? He had tasted her body, fucked her, something Butterman had never done. Surely, he had the better insight into what she really was. No muse, that was for sure.
"Whore" he said softly.
"Jezebel" the word a harbinger for his slow advance on the sleeping couple, his knife raised to strike.
- COMMENTS
Firsttimewritingabout 1 year agoAuthorThanks for your interest. The next chapter has been written, my Editor is working away on it and so hopefully inside the next week it will be online.
Firsttimewritingabout 1 year agoAuthor@Aguni thanks for the feedback. It's a balancing act with Erica and Arlene, throwing all these negative experiences at them, the murders, the violence and then having them both open to sex with strangers, all that and trying to keep them true to thier core beliefs. I just thought it would be interesting to see them both go 'dark' in thier own ways but still have them circle back to thier true nature's, good people in a bad situation.
They are two of my favourite characters to write, mostly because of the fact that they are strong in all the right ways and have a (normally) unwavering moral compass.
Aguniabout 1 year agoMan, Arlene really hits all my buttons. Buxom redhead with an accent. That scene was hot as fuck when they were trying not to get caught. I also gotta give you props for not making it so that memory of her husband is tarnished because of all the dick she's getting (as would feel typical). She remembers him with love and misses the closeness she used to feel with having a partner like that. I dearly hope she finds a permanent lover after all this is done. Erica can hoe around for now, she's still young.
Meanwhile, Erica using her pussy for evil. "You bumped into me and made me fall over. I'm gonna fuck your dad!" Big guffaw at that. This "Web" has such a close eye on them they're even watching them smash? That's scary. Hopefully one of the other dudes in Arlene and Erica's unit are on overwatch. Gonna be real awkward to explain how she fucked someone's husband and she woke up with his throat slit...
Thrillherbrysonabout 1 year agoI really loved this chapter specifically Arlene's adventure, I kind of fantasized you having a character with some younger guys lately and here you've done it. Hmm could Arlene be pregnant by one of (or both) of her attackers? I'm about to do some digging soon to find out who this mysterious guy is in the cliffhanger.
Jekyll1439about 1 year agoThe way Lawrence began to dominate Erica was amazing! Excited by the cliffhanger, can’t wait for the next chapter!
Firsttimewritingabout 1 year agoAuthorBlown away by the feedback, unexpected but very welcome. Thanks all.
Hint - The killers identity is linked to how he refers to Erica
