All Comments on 'Tracking Her Down Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I kinda want more time with Min if there’s a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I feel like the Christine direction would’ve been slightly better. It kind of felt like Min came out of nowhere. I was really looking forward to seeing things continue from where they left off last chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great, but dark, fantasy. Next part please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow. You’ve really awakened something in me with this chapter. I can’t stop fantasizing about being taken by a couple now.

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