All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 05'

As a native Californian, SoCal born, NorCal Bay Area raised, in my youth as a bartender I've experienced a couple of wild after work experiences involving cocaine. Fortunately, nothing led to a often predictable path of destruction in personal life or work career. I fear the end game may not be too happy for the main characters here. But I'm intrigued to see the story through. Good writing particularly for a first submission.

WS