by RetrospectiveInsomnia
Great story way to short chapters. The story is becoming boring however, with its slow pace this far along.
There is a reason kidnappers have kept their victims chained up, even if it takes decades, they will escape.
The major problem with this story is that , so far, we have a smart and tough female character resisting not even virtual but imagined (without direct stimulation to the brain) stimulation and edging. One would think, aside from the problem with the premise commented on by some posters, that this smart woman would just figure out the situation and let go mentally and have her orgasm.
Mental escapism. Women the world over use it to escape their abusers. She's so intelligent and all she's been able to do is pass out once?
Well, I am finding that there is entirely too short of chapters. We just get her being abused (both mentally and physically) and then....does she pass out or goes into some kind of subspace....then she comes back to the present. This chapter she thinks she cums but doesn't? Does it end for today? So what happens, does he take her back to her cage, or leaves her there or ??? The last two chapters could easily been combined.