All Comments on 'Transformations - Dr. De-Mona Ch. 04'

Fucking hell.........Where have these chapters been hiding?

Please tell me theresa chapter 5. The fun thing with prequels is we know the general ending but not the path.

How will Mona escape? Why have we not seen more of Evilyn before now?

Just amazing work

Yeah this isn't going to end well. I'm more wondering how they say Mona and wonder what causes her to become Demona.

Was put in the queue a few days ago! We wanted to wait before announcing it until 4 was up. From past experience, chapter 5 will most likely be on the site no later than Monday.

I saw 3, reread the first two chapters to catch up, and by the time I was done with 3, 4 was up! And now 5 will be up soon?! An awesome summer gift from Wayne and Ann!

Another great story! Like richie78 said, knowing more or less how the story will turn out makes the build up more exciting!

This is an exceptional origin story, and while I know all the superlatives have been used and that my words would just be piling on, I feel the need to offer my continued thanks for creating this and sharing it with us.

I cannot IMAGINE it is easy to maintain this pace and the exceptional level of creativity required to deliver content that somehow draws your readers in deeper with reach page - despite all of them knowing the outcome of the story. And yet you do it every time. Amazing. Thank you.

Awesome. Looks as though everything and everybody is going to hell. Evelyn and Ciara are still my major concerns but I'll have to read chapter 5 now.