All Comments on 'Tree Change Pt. 03'

Well done and just well developed and fun characters having a 5 star time. Love it. Cheers

Perfect pacing...a slow burn. You just know Zac is going to get Alena in the end (pun intended). Not clear if Lachlan is going to make it with Johanna though and that's what makes it even more hot.

Mmmmm. I am enjoying how you are opening the innocent wife's eyes to the whole world of nasty sex. My only critique would be that "it's" is the contraction for "it is", while "its" is the possessive form of "it" and is the word you should have used twice in your tale. I will eagerly await the next chapter to see if our couple will avoid the lifestyle or if they will tumble into it, and then we will see just how far you wish to push their boundaries. Cheers!

Love the pacing of this. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

More fun and games!

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