All Comments on 'Trust Your Partner Pt. 01'

Looking forward to part two.

5*

Stupid and totally unbelievable

Just another pathetic cuck story

I notice you don’t give any info about yourself in your Bio. But judging from what your characters display, I’d guess you are a person with very little understanding of human nature and also would love to star in your own story. And before you jump to conclusions, that’s not necessarily bad—but if you want to readers to really look forward to your work I think you need to make your plots at least halfway believable.

In other words, skip this bull about ANY MAN being okay with his wife of a few months spending three weeks in the woods with another man and he sure as hell isn’t going to give them permission to screw.

At least let the wife have a bit of a conscience; as written she’s already planning and discussing plans for sex with her partner and just how stupid would Hubby have to be not to realize after the time in the woods the partners would be together for years fucking regularly. In fact, was this a real happening, he’d get less of Wife’s pussy than Mike.

On the positive side, your story telling skills are very good. However; you do need to proofread more; I find reading aloud at least one of the last couple times helps greatly.

KEEP WRITING! cd

You would have to have a deathwish to do this, even in fiction.

Cop cuck shit. Isn't that swell?

"I'm trusting you with her"? What does that even mean in these circumstances?

Warnings about it being a cuck story would have been nice

What a poor cuck story again

Will he contact Mike's wife? The talk about them being swingers seem a lot of bullshit! His wife finding out her new husband is a wimp and a cuckold after two months of marriage, is a sure sign that this marriage has no future! I don't expect much of a part 2 of this! 1* for now

After 21 days, Mike will own that pussy.

Thanks for the "5", luvtodoit !

And to northstanderrhino and ScorpioJJ, I appreciate y'all taking the time to read my stupid. pathetic story!!

Pure fiction! Are there really men (or should I say males) in this world such as Zach?

Why would he need to trust his wife in order to share her? Further, why would he trust her? After all, he's well aware she's going to violate her wedding vows and be a cheap slut.

Sorry, but a poorly written story with a stupid story line.

'The stress of the job takes a toll on family members'

So the law enforcement agency sends a married woman away for 3 weeks camping with her 'police husband'? And the cow jumped over the moon.

Come on! This should have been in Sci Fi!

Yawn. Another wife who can’t wait to be a slut. If she had been determined to maintain her fidelity but had slowly been worn down by closeness and circumstances you might have had an interesting story.

WOWWW original approach!!! 5 stars from here! Please, go on soon!!!

Just like that, eh?

So your bio says you have a "devoted" husband, and you cuck him with a steady "boyfriend". Good for you your cunt must be golden to attract all those men and women so we all know what type of stories you will write. Cuck and skank stories. Enjoy your low scores.

Kalimaxos won’t like you trying to link cucks and whores with swinging.

And why would I care about what Kalimaxos thinks, @26thNC ?

Stupid story.

Maybe the cuckold can find a man to fuck him while the skank is fucking her partner.

Could have started as good story, but is just one more stupid cuck story.

The little BTB bois get their panties in a wad over this. They have a limited vocabulary also.