by hypnowolf
Awesome fourth chapter, great build up and character progression. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Evie is perfect. I love how she wants to help in the domination of her mother.
I just finished your series, and I give it 4 stars. Evie and her mom need to turn into paid whores for Jason.
They deserve to pay for their use of him. They wear heavy makeup, slutty clothes, and ruin themselves with
drugs and booze to become a willing stable of happy whores.
I was reading a good story and it just stopped without a real ending. While this happens more times than it should, it’s still frustrating. Please finish the story.
@devildog0302, thanks for your comment on my story, Truth and Reconciliation Ch. 4
I understand your frustration. I too hate unfinished stories. It is my intent to finish the story (and to write other stories), however life is getting in the way.
Writing, at least for me, is quite the process and takes many hours per chapter. With my family, career and hypnosis clients taking priority, I just don't have the time I'd like to devote to writing.
Hopefully I'll get a chance to work on this story soon.