All Comments on 'Truth and Reconciliation Ch. 06'

So glad you continued this series keep it coming!

Wonderful story. Well written and engaging. So looking forward to how this plays out. I assume that Jason's Mom and other sister will also join the family business at some point.

More !

Good to see you again.

I don't understand, gg already had money, and prepared to dump. But then a couple of tears and a confession canceled everything. He forgave all that injustice in a second. What nonsense. He's just useless.

I like the story - and this is really a story, not just a vehicle for hot sex (the sex is pretty hot TBH). My only critique is the way you start a new paragraph while the same character is speaking. It is confusing.

Sorry for the confusion. Having a multi paragraph quote is a standard in writing. When writing multiple paragraphs like that you do not close the quote. So the first paragraph does not have a close quote, but the second paragraph does have an open quote.