All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 06'

Well written and enjoyable.

A pleasant surprise to find the chapter posted so quickly, and a nice way to end my night shift!

5 Stars once again, and a favourite!

A lovely story for your first attempt.

Correction...a lovely story..period

Another chapter to love, thanks for a great read to start my day. I very much enjoyed the reflection aspect that was a piece of the punishment, it frequently seems to be missing in stories. Can't wait for more!

Love your story, and it is progressing beautifully. Very sexy.

Once again wonderful!!

So loving this story!! I'm really loving the way this relationship is developing between them.

5 more stars from me

I'm enjoying this story so very much!

Another wonderful chapter North. The pace, your writing, everything.

Also, whether intended or not, I love that this chapter started with him walking through his own gate, even if just at the airport.

I could only read through half before I got tired of reading 'kitten.' You use it too much. I can't read anymore strictly for that reason. It had a good premise...until this chapter.

Bye, kitten.