All Comments on 'Twentieth Wedding Anniversary'

by coorgi

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 years ago

Where do I start? Why is she married? Maybe in their culture fidelity doesn't mean a thing. Married twenty years and living with a parent?

CriticalThinkerCriticalThinkerabout 2 years ago

For a first story, pretty good. I am sure you will continue writing and keep getting better and better at it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Saw the surprise ending twist coming a mile away. But at least it was well=written. 3 stars.

tralan69ertralan69erabout 2 years ago

@JPJ,

READ the story and your questions will be answered.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good! 5 stars ! Great surprise ending.

secretsalsecretsalabout 2 years ago

@JustPlainJeff: Damn, the fact that it was just the couple role-playing was telegraphed way early, confirmed at the end, and you still missed it? And yes, it's fairly common in India to have the parents move into your home when they're on the older side. Not as common as a few decades ago, but it still happens.

Prince020402Prince020402about 2 years ago

Saw it coming. Amazing the commentors that didn't. Very well written, especially the sex scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

To the author, thank you kindly for taking the time and making the effort to write this story. I read it and enjoyed it.

I note, as per usual, that group of “readers” have decided to rubbish your work. This is unfortunately common in the “Loving Wives” section of this website.

I’m not sure if you are aware of it, but you have a great deal of power when it comes to comments. I encourage you to delete the comments which are rude and useless. You do have that power, author. Below is the process you need to follow to delete all of the rude comments.

1. Log-in to Literotica

2. Click on Works on the left hand side in the Literotica control panel

3. Locate the story in question

4. Click on the “word bubble” icon on the left, on the far right hand side of the story you have located

5. Locate the comment you wish to delete and then click on the rubbish bin on the far right hand side of the comment in question

6. Click on delete comment, and you’re done.

Trust me and believe me when I say that these trolls will soon grow weary of posting nasty comments on your work if you just delete all their comments quickly, consistently, and without any mercy.

iameaseliameaselabout 2 years ago

The end wasnt much of a surprise but it did help remove some of the stain in LW, did I say stain? I meant AND stench.

So thank you for a decent story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I liked the story. I take advantage of opportunities to fuck other men when I travel because I crave cock and my husband is largely disinterested in intimacy. A hard fucking from a clean, intelligent, handsome stranger can't be beaten.

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