All Comments on 'Twice Smitten - A Love Story Ch. 01'

I was fascinated by the way you made your erotic stories confessionals of failed satisfaction. And somehow your male protagonist gets all the way through past trauma to a satisfying love relationship while remaining a sweet boy, despite his impressive engine. He has yet to discover that mindless animalistic roar of satisfaction. And your female protagonist is a voyeur to her own life too. But you roamed through several explicit scenarios without making any of them smutty. And the story of overcoming the trauma was quite an interesting thread.