All Comments on 'Twin Awakenings Ch. 05'

Is she not the mate of both twins?

I was quite amused when the story sidestepped the normal and boring werewolf story by kicking the alpha's ass right off the bat. The twins have a dangerous personality to them but there is a consistency to them. You established a set of characters and even though their erratic actions are a surprise to me their actions seem consistent with who they are and that is satisfying. It is very annoying when characters do things that make zero sense for their character.

Also the sex scene was pretty hot. Not everyone can pull that off. I read a lot of stories on this site that I love but I am like why is this even an erotic story because all the love making is boring and passionless. I think one of the things that make the difference is that overwhelming crazy desire to do something is described, not just what they do and how good it feels.

I came here for porn, but I got an incredible story instead. It is truly amazing, and so much better than I expected. I hope to find this again after some more parts are written. Anyone wanna make a movie out of this?

Why'd you quit this?