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Click hereOur own twins, Mark and Lilly are running up to greet them. They remind Liam and I of ourselves at that age: both happy kids with light blond hair. Though Mark is taller than even Logan, which is hard to fathom.
We go outside and say hello to everyone. Tight hugs and light kisses. We're standing out in front of the house, all in a circle. Talking and catching up with each other. So excited we can't even bring ourselves to stop and go inside the house.
I look around at our shared family, surrounded by love. I can only imagine what we'll get up to over the next few days. I reach over and squeeze Liam's hand. We've been through a lot over the years, but I love my twin brother more than anything in the world.
"This is nice," he says to me.
I smile and agree. "The nicest."
Reading some other comments I agree that the sharing would have been better left out. Otherwise a fabulous story. A solid 5 stars
Bill S.
The sharing ruined it. It could have been something special, twin incest love, but ruined by sharing. Totally pisses all over everything they were saying about the twin connection in the story. I see it in quite a few of your stories sadly (and many b/s stories in general). You're a good author but you seem to be unable to stop including sharing in a lot of your stories when it would be better without. Just my opinion but I feel like many would agree. Anyway, for me, once you share, I just can't feel like there is anything there in the way of love or real connection; it all just looks like nothing but sex and physical pleasure, and my enthusiasm for the narrative dies. It's a real shame because if it wasn't for that, the story would have been top-tier; with it, it just feels somehow tarnished and nothing special.
Only noted one real error that made me do a double take... Lems' doing Liem, but you said Logan came in her. Oops. Lol
So, did both get pregnant over the course of that week? Who got who pregnant? If Lemons' kid was taller than Logan, is he their father? Is Leim the father of the other two? Did they ever do paternity tests?
5/5, though some clarification would be nice.
Good story, pretty believable except stuffing all those folks in a Durango.
The downside was actually having kids not fishing a bullet. I grew up across the street from a family that the parents were 1st cousins. They had 9 kids, only 1 was able to function and keep up in school. The other 8 were special needs both physically and mentally. If you're going to do it with a relative use protection.
Nice story. Another thing that was missing was Melanie and Marissa doing a 69 eating out each others cream-pie. I know Melanie did it once for Marissa but it would have been hot if they did it for each other.
Why is it whenever there are 2 male characters in these stories that one will be longer and the other will be thicker. Just make one bigger
I typically don't like partner swapping, but this one was more joint fun that partner swapping and felt ok.
I'd love to one day see what they get up to at Lake George, both the parents and their kids...
oh yeah, that was some really good story! with good pacing and good sex. the only thing missing for me was Logan cumming in Melanie, and well, I kinda hoped they'll get preggers because of that... :)
That was one cracking story! Well written with good characters. The only downside for me was the belief by the parents that four horny teenagers would share two small beds without anything happening, related to each other or not. Any sensible parents would have been watching like hawks for any sign of inappropriate behaviour.