All Comments on 'Two Different Worlds - Justice'

by mrsarabia

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well written! Please keep the story coming.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I get that you're trying to do chapters but the two stories could and should have been one part, if not half of one part. Not enough here to keep my attention enough to look up the next installment.

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