by akaece
I just loved this story. I loved the way you rendered the hypnosis and how you took your time to show us who these guys are/were and let us watch their minds falter and wills crumble. Please more male/male stories in a similar vein!
I'm not quite sure I take your meaning, coyote. Are you saying you would have preferred if it wasn't gay, or if the gay stuff was a surprise? Either way, I appreciate you giving the story a read!
This could have been a good story if you didntale all the gay shit happen
Do away with the category system and have the tags be the only cataloging in place. I really don't want to find out later that the story is so and so.
Since I don't bother with a disclaimer about "hypnosis can't really do this" or whatever like some other authors do, I'll just say that it's not my view that any hypnosis stuff really works anything like this. Stage hypnosis is more a minor phenomenon of social pressure than something where you can actually make two unwilling guys bone down on stage. So, as long as I'm going to the realm of fantasy, I'm not too concerned with the common knowledge rules about how it is supposed to work. (The fantasy here is that guy having the power to put the whole room of people under like that in the first place - that there exists some hypnosis so powerful and irresistible that the whole theater of people was affected by it in some way.) That's just how I tend to treat this fetish - I'm glad you thought it was a good story anyhow!
That being said, theres no way EVERYONE would have been hypnotized to accept it and having had hypnosis attempted on me, honestly, it doesnt work quite like that.
Thank you! I know there's not much M/M stuff in the mind control category here, so I figured I'd upload this one. Glad to see it's still appreciated.
This is the first hypnosis story I’ve read on here, but I suspect it will remain the best!