All Comments on 'Two Hearts'

Create life for a day and then kill it. It was a person they then murdered....

That's how you played it?????

1 star

Imaginative and intelligent. A genuine story, erotic and a good read.

So was it a dream?

Anyhow, this made me feel weird. Even though it was her husband but at a younger age I still felt like it was cheating and she was very eager and quick to say she wanted the young guy and then say she wanted a threesome. The thought came to her before her husband had reminded her that it was him and not a stranger. Made me wonder if she was close to cheating for some time. I mean she brings home a young man with no memory when her husband is not around?

And the Bi secexual stuff (licking each others cum together) was a turn off.

But an original set up for a LW story. Good points for that.

Same ol it was a dream crap

Little riff on the ending of the movie AI, also reminds me of the Twilight Zone episode (From the 1985 reboot) the Girl I married where a husband finds his wife cheating on him with his younger self

First thought is should have been in science fiction. But an interesting premise.

you'd get rid of Davey. The 'science' was ludicrous, but it was a nice little story.

No adultery, no betrayal, marriage was irrelevant. Could have been a younger version of a lover, a brother, even a long dead father. It was just fucking, why try to make it a marriage thing?

But I’m not completely sure it’s a good different for me.

Just for the imaginative story it gets five stars. Kind of a cuck story (which I generally hate) but not really a cuck story.

Loved it! Very close to some of my own fantasies!

Interesting but I really couldnt get into the "swing" of it. *rim shot*

Hey if he can do human cloning like this I can do bad humor.

Interesting indeed. Can you get cucked by yourself? (Even though this wasn't really cucking.)

One of life's many mysteries.

He cuckolded himself. But then again, isn't that true of most cucks?