by PusLik
yes we all have our comments an likes and dislikes
but dont judge what you know knothing about
nice story ~~ Indiana Dom
... that the first comment this story gets is from some Commissar from the People's Republic of Egalitaria. Real Men _like_ slave girls. It's the truly pathetic wimps that object to women submitting themselves to superior men. And wimps should butt out of the affairs of Men and Men's Women. There is simply no place for them in our lives.
up and telling the Ass w/o a name to fuck off. I really wish his mother would have had an abotion!
Well written. From the point of view of a submissive, it was fantastic. Thank you. :)
Seriously the whole he switches between them two fast... Or at least you don't put in enough detail to explain that. There's no way he could be watching the girl on girl action and then the next moment up to the hilt in a cunt, esp when the two chicks are supposed to be fucking each other.
All of your stories are wonderful! I love your plays on words and situations so that every little thing is erotic. I hope to one day be in a similar position :)
o.k. but writing is an art and not everyone has the ability to write well and express true eroticism ... you need to practice ... more adjectives and certainly more erotic detailing