All Comments on 'Uncontrollable Urges Pt. 03'

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muskyboymuskyboy4 months ago

meh, didn't add much to this story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

what happens when a story runs too long, the thin, contrived plot didn't have any legs, and there is nowhere to go, but the author won't just stick a fork in it. Yawn.

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