All Comments on 'Undead Lust Ch. 01'

Nice playing around with time and perception

I just want to say thank you for taking the time in reading the story, I noticed I've made a few grammar mistakes so my apologies. I'm still new to this, I posted up another one as well. Thank you all.

Very good story, literotica needs more zombie stories!

I’m pretty sure someone surviving in a zombie apocalypse would immediately become fully awake if they thought two dark figures were slowly making their way towards them.

Unless this is not a flesh eating zombie apocalypse? But you didn’t indicate that.

Your story telling is awkward and clumsy and your grammar needs attention.

There seems to be a kernel of potential though.