All Comments on 'Under My Skin Ch. 02'

Good visuals and sense of scene. I am really being drawn into this tale

Well-written, and great plot. Blooming with potential. Longer parts would be better though.

-G

Good writing. Interesting plot, cant wait to see what happens next.

Any update on the story?

Ch 3 is in the process of being written. it is taking longer than expected but there will be more to come.

Admittedly, I preferred chapter one, just because I thought the domme role was written more seductively in it in addition to it being more prominent. That said, the storyline here is progressing well.

interesting story, again very descriptive. interested to see where it goes from here

the detail jumps out agien. i also am enjoying the little things like the mental struggle the male is haveing in this mansion

and outright scary! I want to scream "Run" to that guy

Its a good story and I can see your writing improving but the main character sounds like he may be mentally handicapped