All Comments on 'Vacation Twist Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Congratulations- Worst ever!

Terrible!

He became a neanderthal at the end after let her do all that crap being a spinless wimp.Unreal plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hope he likes prison.

and geting his ass fucked because that is what they do to rapists in prison. At the very least, she needs to divorce his ass and take him for all he's worth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good, but short

Nice to see he didn't start crying and beg his wife to forgive him and tell her to fuck her lover as much as she wanted while he masterbated and clean her afterwards. My only problem was the short chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very strange

Unreal plot. Story about worthless people.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Dude, I had to one this, bc DV and rape are wrong

But you are right, he would have to punish and reclaim, and she atone and be contrite, for the marriage to be saved.

He was also wrong to wake her, and to fuck her while passed out. Jeez.

Still, I can't wait for pt four.

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